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He just stood there, hands in pockets, looking at his big brother as nothing had happened. Well, it was his usual look, the one that couldn't tell you much of the thoughts and emotions hidden behind those eyes. Actually, Mycroft was not much different, they were brothers after all and they were both extremely good at hiding feelings. So they were standing staring at each other trying to guess the following movement of one another. Sherlock expected everything, just everything, he never knew what could Mycroft do if his honour was wounded, and Sherlock was sure that it was. He hadn't told his brother about the plan, he had made him consider his little brother dead. It hurt, it definitely hurt. Not his feelings, but his pride. He had always been the person who knew everything about everyone. And now he was fooled by his own little brother. And that fact made the great Sherlock Holmes feel nervous. Like he was again five years old standing before his brother with his broken toy in one hand and a notebook torn apart in another. Oh, he felt extremely nervous.

And then, all of a sudden, Mycroft made two rapid steps towards him and just hugged him with one hand. It was strange, unpredictable, stunning, but somehow right. Sherlock was not good at analyzing feelings and emotions, even his own ones and what was going on in heads and hearts of other people he could never tell for sure. It was not his area. But now he suddenly understood, that he had really hurt his big brother, hurt his feelings. He finally understood that Mycroft was the one who cared about him all along. In his own strange way, but he did. That stubborn politician, holding so much power in his hands was worried about his stupid little brother. Stupid and cold-hearted little brother.


Sherlock lowered his head, feeling the vanishing smell of somehow strangely familiar perfume and breathed out:

"I'm sorry, Mycroft"
My very first fanfiction here, so please be nice to me :D

Was written for this pic [link] which is also mine. And which is in the preview)

Characters (c) sir Arthur, BBC
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TyanataDraven Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
This was brilliant
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hellofthenigth Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Can I do sort of a sequel to do or just
add somethings to it ?
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alatarielarfeiniel Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hope they do something in the serie, that there relationship becomes better, that Sherlock understands that Mycroft actually really cares (unless what he did) although I like it sometimes when they annoy each other ;) 
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shibainu4 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Great job.
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saphy-ingo Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student General Artist
YOU DID WRITE A FANFICTION!! :D THIS IS AWESOME!! You should write the script for the next series... ;D
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Sherry9630 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
It's a good fanfiction
I love it
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mereloves Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
Aww! Too sweet.
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MissRavenRose Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's brilliant and I do hope that they put this very scene in the next season!
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SarlyneART Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh, all my feelings for this short fanfiction! :love:
Why? First of all, because of the idea. I am (still) so disappointed that Mycroft was left out in Reichenbach; I'm talking about the scene when Moriarty talks about killing Sherlock's only friends. It's like Sherlock and Mycroft don't care for each other, and they are just trying to be more annoying than the other :/ Me don't like, because that's not the kind of relationship I had hoped for.
ANYWAY, now we have it, question is, how does it continue???
In my imagination it is more or less like you described it - Sherlock, because of what so reasons however, didn't say a word to Mycroft, who will be first pretty pissed off, but secretly very very happy that his younger brother has survived. Then maybe a little smile or some awkward hugging, but then the "Imma better tan u!"-thing will start all over again. But I am convinced their relationship will be a better from this point on. :)
So, to get straight to your story: I think you brought it wonderful across. (:
I just think that Sherlock is maybe a bit too emotional, but that is your interpretation of his character, so I'll shut my mouth about it; I won't tell you what you have to write! XD

A last word about the format: It is indeed a very short story, but I would still have made some paragraphs - it's just nicer for the eye than those 3 blocks. ;) (For example new paragraphs at: "So they were...", "And now he was fooled...", "And that fact...", "He finally..." )
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CarryPhoenix Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Да, это уж точно. "Ох уж эти мне братья. Жить с ними невозможно, но и без них тоже не проживёшь..."
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mickeythebluemagic Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Professional Filmographer
That was beautiful! A wonderful story to a wonderful picture :D
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Tenshi-Inverse Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot =)
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silverlugiageo Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Eeeep! This. Is. So. AWESOME! This should totally be how Sherlock reveals himself to My! You need to write moar!!!!!! :iconmoarplz: Your an amazing writer and the picture is absolutely fabulous!!!! xxx
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Tenshi-Inverse Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :blushes: Glad you liked the story =)
I'm thinkig of writing another one, actually x)
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silverlugiageo Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG yes you have to! :iconmoarplz:
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